I still cringe a lot while looking back at these older comics, but I want to highlight what works for me here. Roxy's embarassment (and perhaps arousal) really come through on this page.

Capturing a character's subtle feelings in a drawing can be a challenge. "Hulk angry and needing to SMASH" is easier to draw than, "Hulk nervously reads a letter". Aside from dialogue, panels 2 and 5 do the heavy lifting for this page. Roxy's expression subtly goes from surprise to vulnerable, and the addition of some reddish skin hues drives it home.

The negatives? I wish I'd stayed more "on model" with Zoranna on this page as she varies too much between panels... along with Roxy in panel 6 😬. Also the green organic panel framing make zero sense. It was a call back to our blended fairy beverage from the last page, but no one drank it and it had no bearing on the events here. 🤷