Something Wicked This Way Cums Part 13

Panel one on this page does not work. It slows everything down right after Melvin's stabbing for a hand cramp "joke". I should have removed it, and just added a bit of exposition about Zoranna's need for "the cum of a dead virgin". There is plenty of space for it in panel 2. Panel 3 is notable as the last time the genie looks anything like this. For reasons never explained, she takes on her current appearance on page 25. That explanation is simple though: she ended up being a bigger character in this story that I anticipated, and I hated this weird turban look.

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