This was my 3rd comic about Tobin's Guide, originally posted in 2015. Here are links to the first, second, and fifth in this series. The fourth was done as a short in 2017, and will be published here soon.
As always, I experimented with style on this one. Some of it works, some doesn't.
The good
- I like the colors and painterly texture.
- Having Dorothy's left arm rest on the gutter into panel two is certainly one way to move the eye.
The bad
- I wanted contrast between the Dragon cumming and when he breathes fire, but that splooging is much too subtle.
- Dorothy should have had more bush in the early panels to drive home her anger in the final one.



