Ready for another brutally honest critique of my old work? To the panels!
- Panels 1-2: I vacillate between liking the more graphic approach in this comic, and just thinking it was lazy. These panels are close to working, but needed more work to improve them.
- Panel 3: Pennywise eyes👀
- panel 4: That is not how drool works! It looks okay on her body, but should be seeping from the monster's mouth. Just drawing it off the fangs was a fucking crime.




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Myk
Panel 4: Yeah, maybe, but you got the Pearl of Pleasure just right, to my mind.