Big Package – Part 3

I dislike this page. The overall flow is fine, but there are two glaring issues:

  • Panel one is an echo of this scene in Something Wicked This Way Cums, but is much less effective. This was supposed to be the payoff of Madame Lilith's comments about her collection on the last page, but where the similar scene in SWTWC felt seedy and sexy, this panel is boring. It needed to showcase some of our main characters, but it should have used them better.
  • I fucking hate the way I drew Krissy in Panel two. Kill it with fire.

Fun fact: This stage / bar area is the most revisited location in Live Nude Ghouls. 

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