Something Wicked This Way Cums Part 28

It's hard for me to write about this without obsessing over everything wrong with the art. I mean, this was our first look at Roxy as a Werefox, and I whiffed on the chance for a cool reveal showing that she could be scary. The second panel being silly would have worked better if the first two panels were more menacing. Also Melvin's dong looks too clean. It should look inflamed and gnarly, and less "dick balloon".

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