So much onomatopoeia! I always struggle with pages with a lot of "sounds". When done right they move your eye around the page and bring energy. When done badly they get in the way and take you out of the story. These were just hand written in after the page was drawn. Not great, but not ruinous. It is always best when you put these elements in during the layout phase so you know what space you have to work with.

By the way, I nailed these old man ass drawings... they are almost tactile. 

P.S. Yes, Cherry is meant to look a bit like a Peep.