I have a lot of issues with this page, so if you don't like self flagellation, you should stop reading here. To the critique:
- Panel 1: The arrival of dawn works okay here. My bigger issue is that this may be too jarring after last page's climax. I should have devoted another page to sex. Shown them getting tired. Maybe ended with a wide view of the forest and a loud howl. That would have been a better transition into this page.
- Panel 2: What? I like puffy nipples... Though I don't typically draw Roxy with them anymore.
- Panel 3: I hate the artwork here. Far too flat and rushed.
- Panel 4: Again rushed.
- Panel 5: I fucked those eyes up baaaaad!



