Sorry I missed posting this last week. No good excuse, I was just busy and it slipped my mind.

Like the last page, this whole sequence takes place over a very short time frame. My goal with that was to build tension. That works, but I should have varied the views more. Keeping everything at a medium close-up makes the overall page more boring to look at.

With the republishing of my old comics, there have been quite a few that I've wanted to redraw. Red might be giving me that itch the most. I think that is because it has promise, but the execution just wasn't to the level I knew I was capable of at the time. 😑